Hey man...I pretty much agree with what everyone else has given for advice (on HV20.com). A few things though, sound. If the sound was better (Im strictly talking vocals) then this whole piece would have been killer (no pun intended). Even though I did not understand one word of what was being said I think the audio would have helped make this look more professional.

The scene where the guy jumps off the balcony, that was excellent, especially how you shot it from several different angles. Did you shoot several takes or with multiple cameras? The music was excellent it carried the action scenes well.

Great job.