Thanks so much. We destroyed that dummy and had to throw it away :(

awesome job peter. awesome!

It was cool but I dunno the violence was a bit much. I know that's what you were going for but it's just not in my personal preference I guess. But.. the effects were very well done I must say.

i saw the making of it at first and i didn't get it but now, its a masterpiece, good job and good cinematography hey mann i make movies to it looks like you film in new york maybe we could work together one day!
mirabal productions!

I think this would be a lot better if the violence was toned down a lot - I find that the best scenes leave the gory stuff up to the imagination.

So, for instance, in the scene after he says "You killed my daughters!" why put us through the whole sequence when you could just flash short bursts of it on the screen, leaving us from the step by step of it all, but still being unnerving. That's what you see more often than not from modern thrillers.

The blood coming down from the screen at the end is a neat on-set effect. I love the distortion on the actor as it flows.

You also want to keep font consistency throughout - you're using Cracked at the start. but then you switch to the default fcp font at the end credits. I'd also suggest avoiding red titles ... perhaps if you used some of the 'blood flow' shot earlier and composed the letters with that dropping it would be a nice added effect.

Anyway, that's my 2 cents.