
Brief Preparation in North Carolina
1 year ago
This is some footage from my recent tour with He Can Jog. While in beautiful North Carolina, Erik prepares some sounds he will use in a set at Duke University's radio station.
This is one of my first attempts at actually editing footage. Critical commentary is encouraged.
This is one of my first attempts at actually editing footage. Critical commentary is encouraged.
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Bryan, regarding your video work, I think it was really focused, I thought your camerawork was intuitive and lovely, and the pacing of the editing very relaxed yet, again, focused. The one thing I would suggest is be a bit more careful where you place dissolves. Dissolves do something odd to time, they make a statement no matter how they are used. There was at least one time while Erik was recording the bells where I thought it distracted and would have been better just as a cut.
I also tried my hand at color correction. That's another black magic that I'd like to talk shop with you about sometime. I tried to make some of the leafy green colors really pop, but if you look at erik's arm, there are these spots that look a little blown out or oversaturated. There are times where he also seems to glow. I'm not sure if that was due to the level tweaks or the saturation.
I don't think there are rules in editing. It's like black magic. Dissolves, cuts, zooms, dolly moves, tracking shots, these are all the tools with which you manipulate the viewer's experience of time.
My feeling is that during the part with Erik where the dissolve doesn't work it's because it calls attention to itself and away from Erik. My feeling is that if you are going to do that, at least create a pattern, so it doesn't seem arbitrary. Even a very subtle pattern.
makes me wanna put my mic close to the computer speakers.