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This is some footage from my recent tour with He Can Jog. While in beautiful North Carolina, Erik prepares some sounds he will use in a set at Duke University's radio station.

This is one of my first attempts at actually editing footage. Critical commentary is encouraged.

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  • erik schoster 1 year ago
    I really like the way you edited that together Bryan - you gave a real narrative feel to some haphazard tone recording. Love how the bird and insect sounds came through so strongly too. North Carolina is such a mystical wonderland!
  • Erick C. 1 year ago
    field recordings are so fun. your recorder might not be able to do this but if you wear headphones while recording you can really play with the distance at which you play an instrument and how much of the background ambiance you want in the mix. just a friendly thought. :)
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  • Fredo Viola plus 1 year ago
    awesome video, Bryan, and awesome music, Erik. I found it really fascinating to watch all the prep, and perhaps even more so to watch you produce the sounds using your keyboard and laptop. I'm quite mystified by it.

    Bryan, regarding your video work, I think it was really focused, I thought your camerawork was intuitive and lovely, and the pacing of the editing very relaxed yet, again, focused. The one thing I would suggest is be a bit more careful where you place dissolves. Dissolves do something odd to time, they make a statement no matter how they are used. There was at least one time while Erik was recording the bells where I thought it distracted and would have been better just as a cut.
  • Bryan Teoh plus 1 year ago
    thanks fredo! Originally all of the transitions were just cuts but they seemed a little abrupt. There are some times where the dissolve also kind of makes things look cheesy. For some reason the two intro shots remind me of a low budget safety video from a middle school health class. Are there any general rules of thumb when it comes to transitions? I've never really paid attention to how transitions are made between shots/scenes on video before, but after doing this I've found myself taking more notice.

    I also tried my hand at color correction. That's another black magic that I'd like to talk shop with you about sometime. I tried to make some of the leafy green colors really pop, but if you look at erik's arm, there are these spots that look a little blown out or oversaturated. There are times where he also seems to glow. I'm not sure if that was due to the level tweaks or the saturation.
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  • Fredo Viola plus 1 year ago
    The color correction looks great, Bryan. And yes I think the one ever so slightly cheesy dissolve is probably the same you are referring to. But please understand, I don't think this piece is cheesy in the least, nor lazy. I think it's really well done.

    I don't think there are rules in editing. It's like black magic. Dissolves, cuts, zooms, dolly moves, tracking shots, these are all the tools with which you manipulate the viewer's experience of time.

    My feeling is that during the part with Erik where the dissolve doesn't work it's because it calls attention to itself and away from Erik. My feeling is that if you are going to do that, at least create a pattern, so it doesn't seem arbitrary. Even a very subtle pattern.
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  • Stephane Leonard 1 year ago
    nice.
    makes me wanna put my mic close to the computer speakers.
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  • res ident 1 year ago
    nicely done. 'antfactor' here from em411.
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  • John Shadle 1 year ago
    hey. that's my porch and house! ;-)
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