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Music by: Podington Bear

This is actually an assignment for my digital poetry class. Over the past few days we were supposed to document "language in the world" that we look at all the time, but don't necessarily think of as text.. then we were to create new text out of it. Here is what I came up with:

Out of order.
If you have a
motel,
wet
important
kisses
No
You're in the wrong place.
Come with
flowers.
Air
of love
over
drink!
Help
It's about time.
Effects on mood:
Extreme!
Great regular flavor.

For some reason the new text, or poem, reminds me of alcoholism.
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  • Charlie 1 year ago
    That's creative... and nice editing too!
  • janie 1 year ago
    thank you!
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  • Tallulah 1 year ago
    The poem reads like the lyrics to a new Radiohead song. That darn Thom Yorke...he's such a wordsmith.
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  • Buck Flashroy 1 year ago
    Good stuff. Nice choice of music too. Podington Bear is great. I started listening to him (is it a him?) after one of your previous videos.
  • janie 1 year ago
    i'm so glad! i hoped that if people heard podington bear on here that they'd catch on too.
  • Buck Flashroy 1 year ago
    Do you know podington bear? Or just like the music a lot?
  • janie 1 year ago
    I don't know Podington personally, no, unfortunately not. :( I like his/her music a lot.
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  • Chelsa 1 year ago
    this is great.
  • janie 1 year ago
    Thank you! :)
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  • ojo 1 year ago
    Great pictures, editing!
  • janie 1 year ago
    Thanks!
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