What program did you use to create the composites? Not being overly critical but they need more roto-ing, less saturation & color depth as well as dimensionality

The circles and lines need more work.

For example in an early shot the iris opens and flares details in the girl's shirt. Perhaps using "Screen" the flares could be passed onto the lines. (14s, 26s, 44s)

Second the right angle and circles need 'perspective' to them. The circles aren't very noticeable, but the lines should definitely be warped to mimic the angle of the wall. The shot at 54s was spot-on, with perspective.

You shot the live footage with a 1 CCD, so the color aren't really bright. The red for the lines & circles should be the color of her shirt, and then lightened but should be any more saturated. Just color pick her shirt in a clear spot of footage, and add a little touch more brightness on the luminance slider.\

These are all technical snaffus, much like the light bleeding through the window, artistically this is very good.