---------// The feedback to Hope // -----------------
This is our first speech with each other in Wenzao. For me, Hope has always been a very earnest student in the speech course. I convinced that she indeed spent a lot of time writing her draft and correcting it. Then the speech of acceptance proved certainly that her efforts is worthy. She looked more prepared and self-confident than before. However, I would like to suggest Hope that if she could have more smile, body language, louder voice and eye contact with the audience, she would perform successfully in the future.

Ivy Lin
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// The feedback to myself //
An old semester passed and a new one comes. Although I am more familiar with my audience--my classmates--, I still can't hide my stage fright. This is really a bad beginning in this new semester. When I standed by on the chais, I told myself "take a deep breath then be calm down". However, as I started my presentation, I forgot all my draft and a blank filled with my brain. Suddenly my eyes kept glancing round my audience to and fro from right to left. I knew that is not eye contact which taught by Aiden. This is my "nervous eye contact". There is no smile on my face and my pronounciation is not clear,too. I thought if I had followed my note then read it at that moment, the whole speech would proceed smoothly. Obviously, I didn't do it but chose another way to present --- adamantly try to recall my draft. Woo, it was really a terrible speech!

Ivy Lin