Back Seat Driver (a mini documentary)
2 months ago
I've been working on a project documenting the stories of the many cab drivers I've met while commuting around Chicago. Well, here it is! (As usual, I've subtitled it because most of my subjects have thick accents.) I love talking to all of my drivers... everyone has a story!
MUSIC:
Rusted Root - "Martyr"
Air - "Brakes On"
Robbie Riviera - "Funk-a-faction"
OMD - "Tesla Girls"
Hooverphonic - "Barabas"
David Byrne - "Lazy"
Zorba the Greek - movie theme song
MUSIC:
Rusted Root - "Martyr"
Air - "Brakes On"
Robbie Riviera - "Funk-a-faction"
OMD - "Tesla Girls"
Hooverphonic - "Barabas"
David Byrne - "Lazy"
Zorba the Greek - movie theme song
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Actually, i'd have paid to see that.
very well done and thank you
Loved it, stayed interesting throughout. gj
- Ray
BTW - Im pretty sure that as long as its "news relevant" you can get away with almost any use of images.
You may enjoy the Canon PowerShot TX1 its the size of a deck of cards and can shoot VGA or 720P edit with Vegas Platinum. (check the cam on Amazon) though there is no mic plugs or anything, a used Sanyo HD1 will get you a mic plug.. both shoots to SD cards which in my fuzzy mind is better than getting into tapes.. he he.
Is it me or is everybody leaning to the left in the thumbnails on this page. must be getting late.
Here is my critique like you asked :)
So, with a little mini doc like this, you need to get right to the point. You can start with a little montage like you did, but keep it to about thirty seconds. Introduce your characters, the scene, the road, and then jump right into your story; the interviews.
Also, think about mixing the interviews together to help keep the viewer engaged. Watching the same person answer questions in a row can be a little monotonous. Cut between the interviews, show some of the scenery if they are talking for a while, vary the shot selection.
There are many more techniques that can help, but these are the foremost that I saw. Overall I would say this piece should be about 4 minutes give or take. If you reedit, let me know and I'll check it out!
Nice work!