thanks, i appreciate it. the rushed type was actually on purpose. the text passing by so fast and being tough to read is a metaphor for the way life can pass you by sometimes. i wanted to convey that sense of "hey wait i didn't catch all that!".

maybe it wasn't the best artistic choice though, since you are certainly not the first to comment about it. there might have been a better way to get that across. right now it's kind of like a joke you have to explain after telling it - not nearly as funny.

thanks again.