I *really* really liked the first part of this, but when it cut from the shot of the guy walking up the stairs to the shot of the guy in the raised section with the fluorescent light hanging in front of the camera, you really lost your style. That pan around the guy in the white shirt seemed a little... undeliberate? It didn't have a real "purpose" (other than to get you to the window... which maybe could have been done in a different way?)

Anyways, just trying to help.

Loved the first 2/3!

I didn't understand the nerrator voice, but it was nice :D

I liked the feel of it at the begining.

made me jump