Superb video - good work on the edit, especially the timings, but more importantly I'd say on the way you have managed the whole aesthetic of the theme. It all fits nicely and takes you on a journey which totally drew me in.

In a best effort to make the most of a video experienced online, I plugged my laptop into some reasonable speakers and went full screen, and it definitely drew me in.

I like the text bit at the end in terms of how it looks, its presence, the rhyme etc. but I am always wary of making a statement that tells an appreciator of any work what the images, in this case, mean.

That is unless the relationship between the work and the text are prescriptive, i.e. the video was commissioned to make whatever claim e.g.like a water aid video at a festival. If the work is creatively born then my personal feeling is to allow people to find their own meaning, but thats not a judgment or a criticism, just that if you don't feel strongly that the statement is bigger than the piece, then there are so many angles that this could be appreciated and perhaps asking a question instead might help make the piece yet more memorable.

Nicely chosen source material, which is used in a very promising manner and works superbly with the music.

Respect.

Ed AKA Skootaman
eultra.co.uk

Awesome dude. Awesome.