I enjoyed the story of this very much. It reminded me of some video I saw in elementary school about the dewy-decimal system. It was a cool movie. :D

I liked the story. The dialogue scene bothered me. It seemed it was filmed at two different places. And the mouths did not fit. But I still liked it

awesome

really liked it.
Had a children of men kind of feel to it.

AWESOME!! love the color grading.. very well done

Haha very nice!

I thought acting was good, for the most of the times, except for the chroma-dialogue, which sometimes seemed unbelievable, but for the most it was great!


And also, a quick tip, for the future, you should record also sound FX. You can even do that after recording the scene, by just repeating the actions. Some Sound FX would be great, and i mean it, for the ambientation, like when the guy throws the water out of the bottle, or when the bag falls onto the ground. Also I noticed that sometimes when the two guys walk through the plants, the steps are recorded, others, not. That would help alot.

There's a videotutorial at youtube I'd like to show you. I'll post it later

Well here it is!

es.youtube.com/watch?v=A4xX0sYTAjs

The guy explains it well.


Anyway, the short is very good. Continue like that

Liked it, the sound could easily be improved though. While doing a voice over (since they had gas masks) is a good idea it was lacking a few sound effects. Couldn't hear when the water was poured or when branches of trees were touched, for example. Besides that, nice job. What gear did you use?