Jonathan Palfrey

Hi there, that was a very good first short film. Some very good composition, editing and colour correction. Only change I would suggest is try to improve the audio, e.g have the music playing at a lower volume.

I'm currently in the pre production stage for creating a short film about agoraphobia for my degree, hence why I was looking around for short films on vimeo about the subject to get an idea of what is already out there.

Also you might be interest in my 'student cameraman blog' basically its about my experiences of university and trying to get into the media industry. I also work as a freelance cameraman/editor.

Look forward to seeing more of your videos in the future.