28mm with IndiRailsPro20 (Upside Down). I really need stabilization. 28mm f2.0

Good:
-Excellent lighting. The sun was setting.
-Good lens- 28mm 2.0 is my goto lens. Definitely
-Solid Rig. IndiRailsPro20. Best purchase for my rig so far.

Bad:
-My image was flipped. But, now I resolved this issue by doing a LCD flip hack.
-Still not zoomed in enough, I had to zoom into the footage with premiere.
-Need follow focus, even though it is solid, cannot rack focus without a follow focus.
-Beer on the 50mm haha.
-Need a glidecam/flycam system. Shots are still not stable. Maybe a mono pod- just need something to where I can quickly move to get stable/ interesting angles. Any suggestions?

This is a test shot for my upcoming short film. My wife is standing in for the shot. My purpose on this test mainly on the lighting. It supposed to be in the middle of the night when the character answers the door.

HV30 with Cinemode 24p locked at f2.0

It turns out good.

another project for TV Production class using different transitions.

Done all in Final Cut Pro, no color grading but layered nested sequence.

Some shots were using slo shutter speeds for effect.

35MM Worley's used with 50MM & 70-150MM Nikon lenses.

Bad:
- I still didnt zoom in enough on the focus screen. But, I kind of like the effect.
-Too much noise- was not shooting correctly...I was in cinemode at 3.something aperture on the camera.
-Still not setup with rails on this video (they came in today!!!!! may 7th)

Good:
- I think the shots are real sharp.
- No gain (I think) on the indoor shots
- Crane tripod tip via Eugenia's blog
- 28mm lens is AMAZING.

What do you think?

Notes:

I crunched the blacks/shadows too much- but it is a dark song :) and the sun was almost set. Please- all criticism/suggestions/feedback WELCOME!